tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26185264.post3690249913571399005..comments2024-02-23T01:35:47.264-08:00Comments on a Fair Substitute for Heaven: Where Rachel McMillan hangs out : Chronicles of My First Draft: Some really, really, really terrible writing Rachelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04256326961775297121noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26185264.post-44573607817348900182013-02-26T12:15:56.725-08:002013-02-26T12:15:56.725-08:00I love the phrase "F. Scott Fitzgerald it to ...I love the phrase "F. Scott Fitzgerald it to death"! That's how I always want to write too!Ginahttp://dickensblog.typepad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26185264.post-78631412693335621532013-02-26T09:21:57.478-08:002013-02-26T09:21:57.478-08:00but I refuse to remove the simile where I use Levi...but I refuse to remove the simile where I use Leviathan to describe the size of army trucks. An editor would have to pry that from my cold, dead hands.Rachelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04256326961775297121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26185264.post-14503495376433438742013-02-26T09:19:39.746-08:002013-02-26T09:19:39.746-08:00I want to read THAT book...with a highlighter...an...I want to read THAT book...with a highlighter...and some scotch...ducKy Boydhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13073089300933708375noreply@blogger.com